Room 14 and our big buddies from Room 3...
Thursday, May 26, 2011
Wednesday, May 25, 2011
FAREWELL JAMES
Room 14 had a sad farewell to James last week. He is moving out of Nelson and we will all miss him heaps. We know James will be looking at our blog so keep in touch and leave us a comment James - we miss you already!
Monday, May 16, 2011
AUTUMN SIMILES
We are learning to use language features in our writing: AUTUMN SIMILES
Autumn leaves are like a blazing sun falling from the sky.
Autumn leaves are red like fire.
The leaves are as brown as a freckle.
When you step on the leaves they are as crunchy as glass.
I like leaves.
By Hunter
Autumn leaves blow in the wind like a ballet dancer.
The leaves are yellow and red and brown like a tree trunk.
Trees are bare like a naked man.
Leaves fall down as quick as an ant.
Autumn leaves crackle like a branch cracking.
By Matthew
The leaves twirl in the wind like tornadoes.
Autumn leaves are colourful like a rainbow.
The leaves are orange like a crackling fire.
The leaves crackle like chips.
When autumn leaves fall from the trees they float onto the ground like a feather.
By Buster
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