Sunday, September 25, 2011

NARRATIVE WRITING by Elliot

Captain Jack

Once upon a time a captain sailed across the water. His name was Jack. He had a boat. Jack liked to fish.

One day Jack sailed in the water and he saw a giant shark. It was coming over to the boat. The shark ate half the boat! Jack cried but another boat came. It was a saving boat. The boat saved Jack. Then Jack went back home and he lived happily ever after.

By Elliot