Alliteration; Similes; Onomatopoeia, Adjectives
Tumbling, dirty river. Rolling river flushing into the windy sea. Crashing into the big, bumpy, mad rocks. Pushing into the sea, bashing into the banks. The cranky river is terrifying.
The dark, deep, cold river is splashing
with big deep waves. Drowning the
big flax in the river.
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