Thursday, June 9, 2011


With all of the rain we have been having the river is huge, swollen and raging. Room 14 have written some poems about the raging river.

We are learning to use language features in our writing: Alliteration; Similes; Onomatopoeia, Adjectives

Tumbling, dirty river. Rolling river flushing into the windy sea. Crashing into the big, bumpy, mad rocks. Pushing into the sea, bashing into the banks. The cranky river is terrifying.
By Willem

The dark, deep, cold river is splashing
with big deep waves. Drowning the
big flax in the river.
By Payton

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